Comments on: An Eason Jordan Accusation Sighting! http://www.sundriesshack.com/2005/02/05/an-eason-jordan-accusation-sighting/ Delivering the Best of the New Media Since 2004. Mon, 14 May 2012 14:27:23 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Jimmiehttp://www.sundriesshack.com/2005/02/05/an-eason-jordan-accusation-sighting/comment-page-1/#comment-4967 Jimmie Sat, 05 Feb 2005 16:15:15 +0000 /?p=1427#comment-4967 That's my concern. Usually, in journalistic writing, the important stuff goes up front and you close with a summary of some brief sort, or at leat a line that brings the lede "full circle". Maybe folks will remember it, maybe not. I'd bet they'd remember it more if it were the central part of the story instead of what I read as a "oh yeah, and this happened, too" couple of paragraphs. That's my concern. Usually, in journalistic writing, the important stuff goes up front and you close with a summary of some brief sort, or at leat a line that brings the lede "full circle".

Maybe folks will remember it, maybe not. I'd bet they'd remember it more if it were the central part of the story instead of what I read as a "oh yeah, and this happened, too" couple of paragraphs.

]]> By: Paul Younghttp://www.sundriesshack.com/2005/02/05/an-eason-jordan-accusation-sighting/comment-page-1/#comment-4966 Paul Young Sat, 05 Feb 2005 16:07:07 +0000 /?p=1427#comment-4966 Mentioned at the end of the column will be the last thought the reader gets and may therefore be the thought that sticks. That is if the column holds the readers attention that long... Mentioned at the end of the column will be the last thought the reader gets and may therefore be the thought that sticks. That is if the column holds the readers attention that long…

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